Shutterbug

The tunnel swoops in and scoops me up

As my model stands blinking at the echo of my last words,

‘Run into the light now!’

I look down at my body from above;

That wasn’t what I meant.

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For this week’s challenge, we were to write 33 words as a prelude to these 5 – ‘That wasn’t what I meant.’

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19 thoughts on “Shutterbug

  1. E.W. Storch

    Welcome back, Potts!

    • Thank you πŸ™‚ Sometimes you just gotta dive back into the deep end even if you’re not sure what’s under the surface…

  2. KymmInBarcelona

    Oh, no. That cannot be a good place to be watching from.

  3. I gotta ask. What color was the light?

  4. Nice…! And so good to be “seeing” you again dear =)

  5. ohhh…that was sudden scoop up..

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  7. Lots of mistaken requests for death takes on this prompt. I love your twist on it.

    • Ha, I noticed that myself. I guess that’s the one thing you really don’t want to end up with by accident πŸ˜‰ Thank you very much, and thank you for reading.

  8. I love that first line – very cool.

  9. Whoops. At least they weren’t both vaporized. Maybe there’s a chance of getting deposited back again if it’s aliens and they discover they’ve made a mistake. Well written.

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