grain by atom by sub-atomic particle,
a slow flood became an avalanche once spotted;
wormed an unconscious declaration, didn’t you,
as love overcame annoyance, at your feet,
on my side of the bed
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This, Week 113 at the esteemed http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com, we found ourselves asked for 33 words exactly that included the word
Worm, using it’s third definition: 3 : to obtain or extract by artful or insidious questioning or by pleading, asking, or persuading —usually used with out of
So, here’s 33 words about when I realized that I really was gone daddy gone over my guy 🙂
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How fun and dark and romantic. I cannot believe the brilliance some people can pull out of 33 words. Excellent little diddy.
I am a fan of all of the adjectives listed above, thank you! I’m very glad that you found it enjoyable, even though I’m still not a huge fan of his feet on my side of the bed 😉
It’s all over once you give up an inch of your side of the bed. I like the buildup from subatomic to flood, avalanche to overcame. Smooth!
Ha! Wonderful little love poem.
Well, thank you so much 😄
lovely prose, great thought 🙂 Nice work.
Thank you so much, I appreciate hearing that.
I’m gone daddy gone over this! What a perfect little piece of writing!
I’m a huge fan of your writing, so it means a lot to me that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much!
I love the image this creates of those tiny encroaching movements.
Thank you so much 🙂 It can sneak up on you sometimes.
sorry, but in my world there is no getting over feet on my side of the bed. 🙂 Thanks for linking up. I liked this.
Ha, I get that. I’m glad you liked it.